The weakest piece was of the guy Billy. I should have committed to the white on white look if that's what I wanted. I don't really have much else to say about this piece.
Thursday, October 7, 2010
Comments on two images from the first critique
My strongest piece was the one of my friend with the tattoos. I feel that the composition is strong and of all the sessions for this assignment I came closest to working the subject and location thoroughly. I was comfortable with him and he was willing to work with me. It also printed much darker than my edit, which didn't strengthen the piece.
The weakest piece was of the guy Billy. I should have committed to the white on white look if that's what I wanted. I don't really have much else to say about this piece.
The weakest piece was of the guy Billy. I should have committed to the white on white look if that's what I wanted. I don't really have much else to say about this piece.
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